Copyrighted, do not reproduce, material liable to change. Etc.She waits at the docks at Olympus Mons. Far below on Tharsis Fields, she sees the lines of soldiers sprawling out in black and red. She feels a moment of regret. A few brief flickers of light, like giant flash bulbs, signal the end of her world. Mushroom clouds sprout and bloom, billowing up until they crest the seventeen-mile summit where the Alala, her last armed cruiser, hovers, tethered at the edge of heaven.A few brief flickers of light, like giant flash bulbs, signal the end of her world.
She refuses to cry, but beads of liquid salt drift up like pearls in the zero gravity. Her brothers are dead. Ma’adim lies in ruins over her lover. The Terran Federation waits to glass her civilization from orbit. She is the last of the House of Ares.
But before the last ship out, she passed her memories on – the memories of the Battle at Sarandib Bridge, of the Terran ships looming large and menacing against the Martian sky. She may end here, but this is only beginning. Far off in the dark, the last of her fleet waited in silent wrath.
So say we all.
Bri
p.s. I have good news that I'll tell you later. Promise.
Good to have you back. :-)
ReplyDeleteThis all feels a bit Dune-ish, for some reason. Possibly the Ma'adim and House Ares.
It'd be nice to expand it - I like the reversed viewpoint on Earth.
Welcome back, Bri! I agree with Ian, a sort of Dune feel, which I love.
ReplyDeleteGlad to see you back. And, hey, even if it does have a Dune feel, you're in great company! I should be so lucky.
ReplyDeleteI agree with the others about the Dune feel and that you should expand it.
ReplyDeleteI see much potential here especially considering whose hands it is in.
ReplyDeletewelcome back. You were missed. So glad your semester went well.
WOW! I've missed ya. I guess college keeps ya busy.
ReplyDeleteMerry Christmas I hope you have a restful holiday season.
Great excerpt. I'd like to see it expanded more ... so much to work with. :D